Sometimes
When the dark night is black
And the wind is soft...
Sometimes
When the beach has called and the night is full..
Sometimes
When the waves are small and the moon is gone - but the stars are out to play...
Sometimes
When the night is warm and the beer is cold....
Sometimes
Just sometimes
The earth falls away...
And the ocean disappears
And waves roll to the shore
from the stars
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I love to sit in the sea at night
And hear the sound of the light waves
I am watching the stars and the moon shining
It's a special feeling ... Thanks
Omg amazing, what are the odds? Just put on this:
And then started reading your post, hit me right in the feels. Very well written poetry, loved it.
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Thanks mate
Sometimes when the speed is high and the driver play a song
Sometimes when you fall in love and the night is short
Just sometimes.
Nice idea @drwom
Cheers!
So inspiring poetry.so deep!likes the seas shadows by the moon.
I don't usually like pottery, but yours is actually good, i especially liked this part :
hmmm beer!! 🍻🍻
I love the beach ... the moon .. the stars ... and the waves rolling from everlasting to everlasting.
"Sometimes the dark night is black" personally i perceive a strong sense of repition, normally night is black. Also when the moon is gone, then we have day and we dont see stars in day time coming out to play. However the poems evokes strong imagery. Thats what i like about it.
There is something profound in the directness and simplicity of this poem. It is as profound as it is engaging. Great one.
Soothing poem. All the elements you use to compose it : moon, stars, waves , etc. evoke great visual and sensorial images .
First rate picture. That's the illustration I want for my first tattoo .
Your words made me feel really good. They say a lot. I read them and I feel a feeling of peace inside.
Nice to read your words, while I listen to the music..
Very good picture
very nice post...
Nice poem ..loveit!
brillant post. thank you for sharing. keep it up. good job
very heart touching... soo nice
The picture reall helps conjure up the feeling in this poem, a very good write :)
Good poetry indeed. Though words are less but deep. keep it up.
Good post, i like it
I wish you success
Your heart health is very beautiful
Lovely poem.
Posting bagus :)
Saya sangat menyukai postingan anda, tetap semangat dan menjadi yang terbaik
Very Touching! ;-)
Me encantó tu poema. Está sencillo, pero transmite tanto. Soy nuevo acá, y me gustaría que leyeras algo que escribí. Acá te dejo el link . Saludos
https://steemit.com/poesia/@marioslash13/poesia-del-loco
Well written :)
saludos. te invito a leer mi blog y leer mis poemas.
Nice thoughts. Thanks.
Sublime poetry, and photography gives it a very special touch.
The simplicity of your beautiful words touched me, keep writting!
Nice poem. I love how you played with the words.