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RE: # The River Spring

in #poetry7 years ago

Wowwwwwww! Beautiful poetry, I read every single line and its resonated with me echoing in the spiritual rhythm of a well formulated content.

Love how you put this Dear;-

The river lieth desolate
The goddess refuse to give her the blessing
Yemoja is now a terror to behold
Who caused this living spring?

This was our abode
This was the place of our comfort
This was where the women got blessed
Why has it laid in waste?

Wowwww! You are good Dearie! Keep steeming.

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Thanks pretty @efelexy for the acknowledgement.