Gaze upon the "ARCHER"

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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Looking up at the gleaming glow,
I noticed it all has some rhythmic flow
Stacked creatively kind of in rows
Or Is it columns?
I will never know
But certainly i know this though;
That i couldn't explain such a marvelous show

Each bright little enigma,
Christened the sky..
With such a distinctive aura
Leaving traces of dust that shimmer
Filling my heart with hope
Though it was just a gleamer
Keeping my being in rays of shelter

My mind was plunged into a deep conundrum
Like a man heavily drunk with rum

So i asked my father to help my plight
And he said..... Um!
This situation is really tight.
Yes! he tried with all his might
But, i don't still get myself at night
When i stare deep into the archers light.

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Ever seen something so awesome and glorious that you never forget it, even through the road of time.

Well this is all about a little boy at that time who saw in the sky, the constellation's brightest stars which come together to form the archer. Now if you're a fan of the barbie series, they greatly dwelt and elaborated on what the archer means and is. That is precisely barbie mariposa.

now back to the little boy He gets frustrated cause he doesn't understand what he saw in the sky. He then goes to meet his father to explain to him. His father gets confused at first but tries to explain to the eager listener in front of him, to the best of his understanding
After the session with his father he doesn't still understand but what is he to do, he's just a boy. But maybe when he grows older he'll understand better the marvelous glow in the sky the archer.

now if you ever see an archer one day, you are surely blessed because i have never seen one

my pen bleeds

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I love your poem....can't wait to read another post from you.....this poem is so creative

Really! thank you so much I'll do my best on the next one

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Wow! This is pure creativity

Thank you blood truly

what a beautiful poem. sharing this.

Thank you friend I'm highly honored

Nature offers us unique shows that fill us with joy at times. Other times of hope depending on ourselves.

Yes corderosiete the enigma of nature shines on us