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RE: I Gave Up On You

in #poetry7 years ago

Clouds of your thoughts be the cataract that seals my vision
Thoughts of your desertion plunge detritus in my clogged arteries
For the day you gave up on me is another day of mourning
And the day you receive me again is when i will scream deliverance

This is perhaps a suitable reply @poetic-power. Nice write-up