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RE: Pierced - Purple Flower

in #poetry7 years ago

Pierced by my passion for a Purple Flower
Eyes wide open to the thorn
This the year, this the day, this the hour
To which my punctured heart is born.

Wow!

I used to think that a poem should be a bit long before passing a message to the reader or listener.
But this surely has proved me wrong.
Short, precised and filled with deep messages.

Blending colours (purple) with an event (Easter), I really admire this..

Bravo my friend @onceuponatime

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