To the sun
To the sun
We’ll burn up
But it’ll be fun!
While this choice
May be our worst
We get to say
We did it first
Let’s set a trend
With our lives end
Two toasty ghosts
The best of friends
Image sourced from pixabay.com
To the sun
To the sun
We’ll burn up
But it’ll be fun!
While this choice
May be our worst
We get to say
We did it first
Let’s set a trend
With our lives end
Two toasty ghosts
The best of friends
Image sourced from pixabay.com
Hi elementm.. Nice wording dear and ghosts are so lovely that i wana take them.. Keep it up
Thank you @biyanoor 👻
You are welcome.. Your heart is beautiful just like your smile.. Keep smiling
Loved the combination of verses and the rhyme with it. I too, write some (maybe you'd like to have a look), though I've only written 1 poem so far; it's mostly coz I've started using Steemit only the past month. Also, I think you'd like my work too maybe. Do give me a shout out if you do, perhaps we can do some interesting work together... :)
Cheers
P.S. Upvoted you #togetherwearestronger
Hi @squarecircling, I checked out your blog and you’re right, I do like your writing. I’d love to see more from you so I’m following you now. You mentioned you’re new so here’s some advice:
-Put up a profile picture. It doesn’t have to be you but having an image gives people something to relate to. Add a little bio to your blog too (mine’s only five words long, yours can be longer)
-Write a #introduceyourself post. Search the tag and see how it’s done. If you do it well (unlike when I did) it can make you a fair amount of money and quickly gain you some new followers who like what you’re about.
-Enter some writing/poetry contests. You can win SBD or Steem, some of the people who run these contests resteem the entries and other people who enter them tend to check each other’s work out so you’d be likely to meet, follow and be followed by other writers and poets on Steemit
-Enter #openmic if you’ve got musical talent. Honestly, I’m hoping you do because I think your writing style would be amazing paired with music and there are extra prizes for original entries.
-Don’t focus too much on your upvotes yet. I visited your blog and then followed you because your comment was well written and it made me interested in what else you had to say. When you’re new on Steemit the most valuable thing you have to give is your ability to read posts and respond genuinely and coherently.
Anyway, I’ll be looking out for more of your poetry so please post more. And let me know if you need help finding the writing contests 👍.
Thank you so much @elementm. I hear you, and I shall strongly adhere to your kind advice. Furthermore, I am deeply humbled by the amount of effort you have shown me - so again thank you.
I shall definitely be following up on all the things you have enumerated but yes, I indeed would need your help in putting my finger down on some of the well-credited Writing/Poetry Contests as I did try looking for some but most were very much outdated and presently were not being conducted. Again, I thank you for your guidance on the matter.
Absolutely, I shall certainly be composing and posting more poetry very soon.
Cheers :)
Hi again! Sorry it took a while to get back to you. Here are a few contests to start you off:
https://steemit.com/poetrydice/@robyneggs/pdc3k-week-21-winner-s-annoucement
https://steemit.com/getillustrated/@slhomestead/getillustrated-winner-and-prompt-3
https://steemit.com/contest/@moonleesteem/steemit-haiku-contest-week-13-original-contest
Good luck 👍
No apology needed. Many thanks ✌
im upvoting you..please visit my blog
Hi Sateesh. You commented so quickly that you couldn't possibly have read my poem. You also didn't even mention it. When you do that, it makes people much less likely to check your blog and more likely to flag you.
wow.......so nice of you.......are you made this...........?just amazing...........
Thanks, yes I wrote it 🙂