Love that Lasts

in #poetry6 years ago

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Wonder what's going through your mind
As you sign those papers
Once claimed to love each other
Now both your eyes betray hate

Always sad to see
A fairytale gone sour
The end of the road for love
When the story demanded more

Not saying we're to blame
For things beyond our control
But why do we love and fall out?
Simply opening and closing chapters

I believe In something stronger
Even when my story's no better
A true love that lasts forever
Like the bond between cub and mother

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I'm really enjoying your poetry. This one is very relevant in my life.

Thanks for sharing.

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We all in a way have felt it one way or another.

Am truly grateful for your support Mike.

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howdy there empress! I love the last four lines and can't agree more, that's true love. Well done empress.

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