Hollow Magic (An Original Poem)

in #poetry2 days ago (edited)

The right people,
chained to the wrong dreams,
building castles within the clouds
in a storm of unmet needs.

A shadowplay of purpose,
where brilliance burns
for things bound to crumble—
glowing screens reflect insatiable hunger.

The language escapes us,
this magic unnamed.
Wires hum with the power
while hearts strain from the weight.

Innovation crowns the hollow,
a cathedral to our desires,
where profit chants the hymn
and silence answers the prayers.

What could they create
if freed from this machine?
If brilliance turned to balance,
if magic spoke to meaning?

But for now,
it dazzles and it devours,
decadence dressed as destiny—
rising from the wreckage of wonder.

The machine hums louder,
singing its song of progress,
while we barter tomorrows
for each of our gilded yesterdays.

Beneath the shadows,
embers smolder—silent, unbroken,
longing for minds to shatter their chains,
to script our fate and cast the blame.

~Eric Vance Walton~

Be well and make the most of this day.

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Good afternoon dear friend @ericvancewalton how are you?

I never tire of saying that you are an excellent composer of poetry, you always surprise us with beautiful poems.

Thank you very much dear friend, for sharing another beautiful poem.

Have a lovely afternoon

The machine revolution! As I read, I remembered my Indian grandmother, who had hair as black as a crow's wings in her 70s, and worked magic with her hands: food, antidotes for flus and ailments. She was a real witch with the bushes. My grandmother laughed a lot. Now I see so many young people bitter, unsatisfied, not knowing how to do anything. We look like machines. We go out of our way trying to achieve what is supposed to make us happy, when happiness is much simpler. Good thing you are writing more often (you are accomplishing one of your goals). Hugs to you

Very nice! I saw a meme the other day and it made me think of you. It said something like I want AI that can do my laundry and dishes so I can focus on my art, not AI to do my art so I can do the dishes and laundry. It made me think of you. Heck, it was on FB, so it might have been you that posted it :)

The right people chained to the wrong dreams...

Is a truly touching one. It reminds me of the fact that we can be making efforts for success yet if those efforts are expended in the wrong direction we are just wasting our time and energy. Thanks for sharing this brilliant and moving poem. Happy new year.

decadence dressed as destiny—

I love that line. We explain the decay of our sovereignty as mere destiny, so that we needn't have control over the matter. We willingly rot. Oh dear that's a good line too.

longing for minds to shatter their chains,

I long for this. Man do I long for this. Slowly, these shackles are coming undone. I hope the next viral con - which looks like will be bird flu, all the same creatures are out actively ramping up fear of our animals, our best friends - will allow more of us to look twice at the info we are relentlessly fed.

We make the mistake of dreaming, so we regret it when it doesn't come true. Amazing poem

This is nice

Perhaps, we look for our unmet needs in the wrong dreams...

Amazing

!LUV

you have very good poetry, I read with my soul stanza by stanza, you did your best