Stop (An Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

What if each moment
is its own dimension,
and time is but a strand
of worlds in which we lace?

Beyond cause
and effect
lies an amazing place
of coincidence and
it’s so easy to be
driven to distraction
by the stories it speaks.

Yet when Divinty enters
the room you know it,
the undeniable essence of it
dives deeply into your heart.

It echoes a reminder
of who it is you really are,
presenting you with
a set of eyes
to connect with,
a moment of
sacred reconciliation.

In this world
beauty is rarely
long with us,
so we must
embrace imperfection,
learn to trust it,
before we rust
into oblivion.

To find happiness
we must simply stop running.
There is more
to life than the hustle.

A lasting legacy
isn’t built upon
making memories
we think will become
some gripping memoir
but merely walking
the path of the sages.

(Gif sourced from Giphy.com)


As always, I thank you for reading.

Yours in the Chain,

Eric

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To find happiness
we must simply stop running.

these lines made my day man
totally agree

Thanks! It's a hard thing to remember sometimes.

Beautiful poem, second last and last stanza are best .
Thanks

Nice. An ethereal quality grounded in simple truth.

I appreciate that @coldsteem. Thanks!

Extraordinary writing.
Really it heart touching poem.
Poetry helps to express the feelings of the human mind.👍

Nice poetry and these lines are awesome
To find happiness
we must simply stop running.
There is more
to life than the hustle.

Damn right.

Beat of realization of poetry. You're a amazing poem creator. I've seen before your superior poems in this platform. Exactly awesome productivity @ericvancewalton.

Beautiful poem written from the heart that's so cool thanks for sharing this work of yours :)

Woww heart touching poetry, with each line having some useful meaning
To find happiness we must stop running, there is more to life than hustle. Its excellent. Its about same plot that I recently posted.

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Yes I really enjoyed it.

eric that was so beautiful and inspiring.
Made me feel totally calm

To find happiness
we must simply stop running.

and this line was my favorite.
Excellent

Thank you @mindtrap! I really appreciate it.

The imageries are amazing, you let flow of your emotion and thoughts and you captured essentials mildness with this amazing poem of yours, it's really beautiful, never knew you can write poems

Thanks, @josediccus! I don't post them as much as I used to but have written poetry for about 25 years.

Yes, but it's sometimes so difficult to stop, isn't it? All we want to do, or all we're told to do, is run...
Amazing poem, Eric, you are one talented man.

and time is but a strand
of worlds in which we lace?

Love this.

It's so difficult! After decades of meditation I still have to remind myself sometimes. Thank you @honeydue! I really appreciate your kind words.

Hi @ericvancewalton, That would be awesome song indeed. Lot of meanings there. Totally touched my deeply heart spirit via these vocabulary using. Actually I'm trying to take imagine of these poetry taken some time. I feel I'm going various world via your contexts here. Absolutely brilliant poem.

I really appreciate the kind words, @madushanka. Glad you enjoyed it!

Beautiful profound poem @ericvancewalton, made me stop and ponder!
We're always so busy trying to squeeze too much into each day that we often forget to enjoy the moment, and how wondrous when we do stop!
Are we being drawn into the ways of the world too easily?
Thank you for sharing your wisdom here with such beautiful poetry!

Thanks, @lizelle! It's so important for me to remember sometimes that I get more done if I stop and recharge. There's definitely a time to hustle but there's also time for rest...I guess it's just about balance. I appreciate your comment!

For sure it's all about balance!

To find happiness
we must simply stop running.
There is more
to life than the hustle.

I agreed! If we want happiness in life, then we should stop running like for thing's, money. We have to find the positive way of life, to spend every moment happily

As always with your poetry, a few lines reach into me on a personal level, piercing the mundane chatter to speak a truth or two. In this poem, the way you've framed the space of coincidence sheds a new and true light on it, a way of seeing it that I hadn't considered.

So glad you're continuing to write poetry, in my view it's one of your true gifts. I still read and reread poems in your chap books every so often. Really rich food for the soul!

Beyond cause
and effect
lies an amazing place
of coincidence and
it’s so easy to be
driven to distraction
by the stories it speaks.

Yet when Divinty enters
the room you know it,
the undeniable essence of it
dives deeply into your heart.

I'm glad you got something out of this one @natureofbeing! I'm reading a book called, "Synchronicity" by Dr. Kirby Surprise (Yep, that's his real name) and he talks about how the Universe merely mirrors our thoughts and intentions with synchronistic events in our own lives. He said so many people lose themselves in the maze of this SE's and become paralyzed. Thank you for your comment, my friend!

the concept of being lost in synchronicity is really kind of mind-boggling and makes a lot of sense! I may take a look at this book.

In this poem you have put diversity of thought and answers to them.
Such a beautiful poem that you cant STOP reading..
Awesome work

Thank you so much, man!

Honour for the honour.

The silence of your heart is the voice of God, and the vanity of your heart is the voice of the world. We sometimes have to stop and listen to our heart. Very beautiful poem, with a lot of sense. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for reading!

If each moment is its own dimension, then the infinite universes theory would make a lot more sense. After all, each of us would be having millions of dimensions. Who's to say the other moments couldn't happen too.

I like what you said about how you can know when Divinity enters the room. There's a gravity to it and the moment seems more real, more tangible, more unique. It's not just one in a myriad of other fleeting moments, it's something to be cherished. When we're able to be present in that moment and enjoy it for what it's worth, then we can find peace. So many people spend their life trying to attain something or become something, rather than just resting in who they are.

That's what sparked that line, the infinite universes theory. Very astute for you to pick up on that! Yes, I can think of a handful of times in my life where an overall feeling of joy just overcomes me after meeting someone or experiencing something. There's no denying that it's special but it's difficult to put a label or explanation to it. In this age of instant answers to almost any question (Google) it's great to know there are still some mysteries.

You must have allowed your emotions to flow with this one. The words and the message are quite inspiring. Been a long time I wrote a poem. I think I will dip my quill in the ink box to start out something.

I'm glad you enjoyed it @lordjames! Poetry is a kind of therapy for me, looking forward to yours!

I enjoy your poetry.
There is nothing like a poem to hold you into the moment.
I like the gif you used too so relaxing.

I'm glad you liked it! It took me a while to find just the right gif and this one spoke to me. Thanks for reading @rebeccabe!

The poem is beautiful and poetic really well written
Wonderful poet and great

Great work when you can touch so many! My favorite
To find happiness we must simply stop running. There is more to life than the hustle.

I am so trying to get there!

awesome poetry!!
i really enjoyed it..@ericvancewalton
i also try something..Like

"i come before you
To stand behind you
and tell you something
I know nothing about"

Funny
@upvoted

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interesting post once again thanks for sharing your knowledge :)

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wow.....excellent post and poetry. looks very beautiful......

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Sir you are a great poetess. I love your poetry.

Those are really some nice and beautiful words

While yes happiness is indeed inside of us ,we should not run to search for it ,Loved the words !

This is deep. I liked it. Thank you for sharing with us!

I appreciate you stopping by and commenting! Thank you.

What if each moment
is its own dimension,
and time is but a strand
of worlds in which we lace?
I like these lines beautiful thinking

Beautiful poetry. so simple and heart touching. We can't find perfection in all the things so we should remain contented what we have and shouldn't run after materialistic things. Happiness and joy is our inner feelings. It's always better to enjoy our life and surrondings. Thanks for sharing @ericvancewalton

All human beings seek peace, but few people get it, I agree with you, we need something else.
Thanks @ericvancewalton

beautiful conjugation of lapabras, very beautiful: the room you know,
the undeniable essence of it
It plunges deep into your heart. thanks for sharing this poem, success

Nice poem,
congrats