The pictures only lessen the poem. I would use none or one. It does sound like a diary at some point instead of a poem. I like your theme though [liking people while hating to be around them].
The pictures only lessen the poem. I would use none or one. It does sound like a diary at some point instead of a poem. I like your theme though [liking people while hating to be around them].
Thank you very much for the feedback. I appreciate it.
Generally that's my theme. Poetry that doesn't sound like poetry, but you're right this one is particularly unpoetic, and could have done with far less pics since there's not a whole lot there.