Haiku, image - Mizu no Oto Contest week #3

[f3nix]

^{Photo credit @marcoriccardi}


Between sea and skies -
a lingering cormorant
bathes in the sunlight

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Fra mare e cielo
due ali al sole estivo -
bagno di luce


世の中や蝶の暮らしも忙しき - 小林一茶

Comments

[bananafish]

The English and the Italian version could be considered two different haiku, you even moved the kireji.
I think the Italian one is more evocative and subtle, but both are very good

[f3nix]

Yes I agree.. but sometimes the translation is so difficoult.. I did well in telling you to consider the Italian one. From now onward I'll always put a note on which one is the original version.

[agmoore]

Missed out on voting for the haiku...lovely. So I got you in the comments :)

[f3nix]

Hey dear! I'm being a bit lazy with steemit after the mess lol .. I was starting to detox it looks like 😜 let me go and check your blog..

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