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RE: Purple Petals, A Poem

in #poetry • 8 years ago

"I wondered what had killed you
Was it the lack of bright sunshine
Or was it something more subtle
Yet far from benign"

this is like c4 explosive, yet looks like childrens play
GOOD JOB

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     8 years ago  

    Thanks for the feedback! It was really well put, and I couldn't be happier that my writing stands out to you!