My assigned poets for this last week were @trucklifefamily and @stephenparato. Here are my comments on their work respectively.
I Carry On. I particularly love the imagery in the last stanza.My pick for the week is a poem by @hazem91 entitled
When it looks and it sounds
very weird to stick around.
I seem to spin like candle flies
Around the fire until I die.
hehe funny @tygertyger wanted me to remove that stanza :D :p Thank you @firststeps
I mentioned this in one of the critique classes. It's useful in how it reminds you what is easy to forget at times - all suggestions are just that, and at the end of the day it's your call to make, as the poet :)
Just goes to show you how subjective poetry is.
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