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RE: Begins Hopeful 🔥 Then Rage Comes To Claim

in #poetry7 years ago

Wowwww.
Amazing poem ma'am. As always you have come up with one more meaningful poem that teach something and may realize much more.

I like these line more:

Our love is something so cherishable
Despite failing tests we aren’t perishable

Do not mistake my willingness to start this fresh
For something you and I will both regret

Love talks, in between, it’s not in our control
Master plan, it’s impossible watch it unfold.

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. Keep posting more like this.