Tomorrow - An original poem

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Many people will sleep tonight

while the moon and the stars shine clear and bright

No one knows what tomorrow will bring...

Will it bring happiness or will it bring pain?

The trees look black while the moon smiles across the ocean

Shall we catch the air to make a magic potion?

Because the darkness and silence, brings a great mystique

while the sounds of the waves break, and plays music

While I sit here on the open beach, I look up to heaven

and realize, that there is still so much hope for men...

We play such a tiny part in this great big race

We should all just slow down while we struggle through this maze

We should love the world and everything in it

With all the pain, love and fantasy

Be like a child that believes anything

and believe that goodness is all that tomorrow brings.....

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Beautiful poetry , i like it very much, thanks

There's certain pull, sitting in the dark with only the waves and moon keeping you company. It brings about a certain melancholy, a certain sense of the vastness in which we live in, and of how small and insignificant we are.

Hello @giantbear: very nice poem. I imagine that you were very close to the beach for such inspiration. Very good closing of the poem. Greetings.

Beautiful poetry :) Since I too am a poet, I can really feel the beauty in this poem !

Liked it a lot :)

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I love the rhetorical questions it's amazing how you embedded the right mood for beautiful poetic effect

Nice poetry @giantbear i like it :)

Love the last part:

Be like a child that believes anything
and believe that goodness is all that tomorrow brings.....

Beautiful poem my friend, really enjoyed it, big ups 🙌🏼

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Wow, amazing words to describe the beauty of nights and thoughts of people about the new morning and day, moon light is spreading the lite brightness on earth which inturn makes our earth so adorable. And yes we have to live like child because, real happiness is hiding in innocence. Thanks for sharing this poetry. 🙂

Stay Blessed.

You touch my heart by poetry .i also like to sit alone at night to see the stars and moon and think about past and future plans and just like you think that may tomorrow come with my wishes and dreams .nice words love it

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I love how you chose the moon for this, it's just perfect for this excellent piece.. 💚