A PANTOMIME OF TWO EXTREMES

[godswill]

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Dreams veiled in a mist,
Heart robbed of joy,
Filled with the reflections of suicide,
A better life, a story yet to be written.

Never to unriddle the dept of time lost,
Yes, all washed away by the sea never to return,
My feet Dazzled through life,
A rolling stone my wealthy neighbour,
The eclipse of life,
Yet, drown in night mares of hope.

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Enmity with my bed,
Sleeping in hard work,
Till the blind can see my vision clearly,
A pantomime of two extremes.

This is my little poem.

Please go through it. And fault me where necessary please so that i can improve in my writing skills. That is your comment is highly needed.

Please help me resteem this post.

@godswill

Comments

[davett]

Wow that storm. Very good pic.

[godswill]

Thanks for stopping by

[moiseslink]

Very good, I really like this poem, I will follow you, it would help me if you follow me

[godswill]

Thanks for stopping by.
Yes, will appreciate that

[neverapen]

I love your poem, and I relate. It's difficult for me to write poetry, I someyimes feel sanctomonius, despite of myself. Your poem is wonderful

[godswill]

Thanks dear. I really appreciate.
I felt the same way, just that i have inspirations to write sometimes

[nuelapex]

Nice!

I commented, upvoted, and followed you, kindly do the same.

[godswill]

Thanks for stopping by

[cornholio]

Stigmatatata from Lake Titicaca!

[godswill]

Lol .
Thanks for stopping by

[cornholio]

I am the Great Cornholio! I'm a gringo!

[ogoowinner]

This is nice. I don't know much about poetry.

[godswill]

Ok dear.
But how do you see the poem