We contemplate the origin,
Of time and space and every thing,
Our minds contorting pointlessly,
To comprehend infinity,
We look so far beyond the mark,
For starts and ends and "finity".
When really all's simplicity,
All things have always been.
As energy meanders through,
The changing states with which imbued,
Material worlds do masquerade,
And live and die in time and space,
Yet never static, in constant flux,
They sometimes make for Goldilocks,
The worlds where we as living things,
Can strive and thrive for times and seasons.
Retiring to, as all things do,
That purest, basest primal state,
Of unformatted energy,
From which all substance emanates.
But wait there is a missing link,
Tween that and this complexity,
The link we tend to fail to see,
The creating force of unity.
To some, its spirit, to some intelligence.
To me it is in all things present.
There is no end and no beginning,
It is and always was preeminent,
In every one and every thing,
In all of space and all of time,
In every structure and all design.
I call it God, you do as you will,
But every thing so organised,
By It's intent and It's decree,
Assumes its form in all humility.
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Thank you :) An interesting approach. I hope it earns you rich rewards but fear it may well be seen as a generic response which could bring ill will from some quarters.
I love it - and it reminded me of something I just wrote in my blog about contemplating the infinity or never endingness of the universe...
Thank you :)
Nicely written and you’re good with rhymes. I like it!
Thank you kindly :)
Very well said. Thank you for sharing!
What's inside will out :)
You got my vote and a resteem :)
Thank you. Ill reviee your blog.
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I havn't come to grips with that idea but thanks anyway.
True beauty flowing here.
Thanks for inspiring.
Thought you may enjoy this one that just flowed through.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@wildsunlove/five-elements-yin-yang-endless-love
Cool :)
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So nice podt
Im kinda picky bout my poetry so even tho im a minnow n i have no payout-- my vote is special. I loved this n also glad u are in #teamsouthafrica !
A special reply, thank you. I will being reviewing your content :)
I like your rhyming, it sounds great but I'm not a poet.
Excellent!
Thank you :) That means a lot, coming from you :)
I love poetry. I regard it the same as painting....only using words instead of paint!