Very touching and raw. I resonated with many aspects of it, as most will, I guess, from various perspectives and it made me feel, which is the essence of poetry itself, to me. Really good read and very expressive of you to share a piece of your heart and life in such a way. Kudos and respect, but I know that when it comes out raw, it has to stay that way, or else you lose the essence in translation.
Thank you.