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Great submission, but it doesn't rhyme. This is a rhyming poem contest.

it doesn't rhyme? what do you mean? O: would it be okay if I edited it to make it rhyme more? or is it final submissions only?

No you can edit it, I'll take what is there on 9th July as final submission. The end words need to rhyme, or at the very least every other line (like in my example).

That's brilliant, thanks for editing, will resteem.

Thank you ! :)