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RE: AoExpanse

in #poetry6 years ago

One of the reasons i keep coming back to your blog is because, besides the fascinating topics you discuss in your poetry and the beautiful images you always manage to impress us with, your use of language is unique, in the most frustrating sense of the word.

As many users have stated, it's simply put, hard to understand: it takes some time, but it is worth it.
I love the fact that your poetry keeps me working on language; on vocabulary. It's refreshing.
Oversimplification has its risks.
It can't simply be said that the color game we see in the physical world; the blue and the gray that are replicated in our own bodies at an even smaller scale, are part of this mega design with very complex physical laws and properties that even when we can't understand them, by experiencing them and appreciating the effect of their work, we become one with creation.

We want to be reasonable and, through our logical explanations, self explain ourselves; our planet downsized to a blue and silicone ball radiating sparks though a universe as vast as our our nervous system is to the tiniest neuron.

It may not make much sense to the common eye/brain, but we can feel the sparks that radiate from the tip of our fingers all the way throughout our bodies when we touch ice, or fire or a sharp edge; and we can tell the difference when that finger touches another finger or, even better, a whole lot of AO-silica skin.