vacillating...
this resolute and sanguine girl,
bent over the bench,
with a cigarette in hand,
fantasized about her idyllic world -
where nothing is invidious,
and people are magnanimous.
her unmarred imaginary universe celebrates liberality and interdependence.
not violence, not narrow-mindedness, not self-interest.
as she praised the boy effusively,
they both fell into this river of unknowns.
an impromptu rendezvous,
where pinnacles of desire aspire.
she finds him absolutely amiable.
he finds her eclectic.
a sense of equilibrium exists here.
they complement each other melodiously,
careful not to sabotage anything.
the moment he walked into the room, she knew.
he possessed the most mysterious eyes of all.
those large and hypnotic eyes,
they could keep you still for eternity;
wondering who the soul behind those eyes belong to.
his faith in his own infallibility only aggravate her sense of fairness.
but the chemistry between them is undeniable.
they've both left indelible impressions on each other.
we need to be vociferous and not reticent.
voice your feelings, let the true colors flow.
who knows where this beautiful tide will take us all...
but is it possible to have two cakes at the same time?
image credits to pixabay
I love it! I'm in to poetry too :)
Me too 😊
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It is necessary to speak about feelings. Interesting poetry.
Loved your choice of words, every single line written is so meaningful, following you !
@honeybee, one more piece of wonderfull poetry you shared with us thanks a lot. poetry around a girl whose all feelings just vaccilating.all the words and lines you beautifully managed. your skills of poetry writting really proved you a good writer and poet.keep it up. my appreciation as Resteem, upvote, comment and follow with you.
Once in a while, sure it's possible, it's two cake all the time that's bad for her.
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Yea I agree
You have to talk about feelings.
this is art!!
las she praised the boy effusively,
they both fell into this river of unknowns.
an impromptu rendezvous,
where pinnacles of desire aspire.
she finds him absolutely amiable.
he finds her eclectic.
a sense of equilibrium exists here.
they complement each other melodiously,
careful not to sabotage anything.
love it.
Please vote and follow me @honeybee thanks
great poetry @honeybee!!
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@honeybee what an amazing piece of words. These are must be taken from soul and deepest of heart. And yes LIFE IS INDEED A POETRY. keep rocking man!
By the its my1st ever comment on your posts. Regards!
cheers dude. life experience's drive my poetry. i need to keep living to keep the words flowing. it's nice to have you comment. i follow you now
@honeybee I am also into poetry. I love the language control which peacefully and creatively sets out the rest of the piece. Amazing.
Thank you, it's beautiful
Another amazing poem that touches the heart and opens the eyes. Well worded and flows nicely. Thanks mate!
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For the arts! Upvoted.
Good !
I upvoted and follow you dear so please follow me and upvoted me on my post i shall upvote you regularly
This is awesome
I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done. Amazing Job. Keep it up! I'm a fan now. 😌
Followed you.
Beautiful poem. My thoughts on the eternal two cake conundrum: Can we have two cakes? - only if we never plan to eat them; The only way to have your cake, and eat it too, is if you're willing to make the extra one yourself; And as a friend once told me, "cakes are meant for eating."
Amazing
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Hi @honeybee, love the poem, very reflective piece and thought inspiring. As a fellow poet I am trying to build up a following on here sharing poems from my wordpress blog. Check out my poetry posts @raj808 I have just started sharing them on here so there will be more to come, they're mostly nature inspired :)
Very creative .. In depth tuition