Do you know the reason why you are unhappy?
It's not mummy's fault nor daddy
Not your sisters fault or your granny
It's not my fault or his fault
And it's not because your siblings like to insult
Since it's nobody's fault, then it's who's fault.
Is it my fault? No because it's yours....
It's your fault because you're not serious
You choose to be lazy when you're really a genius
You can be great but you are not, because you feel not
Because you are too lazy even when cracking a peanut
You think you've made changes but you've still not
Stop making people see you like you're an idiot
Make the real change, take some steps further
Take more steps ahead, stop being a still dot.
I love the message here, never settle and strive for more than you are today!
Poetry is lovely, it is a good companion towards the inner self. I would just say, it is best when the writer reads other authors' poems. They have been there and can show you a path
I love your central idea you sending across that there is more room for improvement. thanks for the advice
wow!!! lovely