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RE: Black

in #poetry7 years ago

Cool

I enjoyed the first part but got confused towards the ending.

You said

she is a distress feeling
a storm with gloomy clouds

And then

Still under her protection and comfort
There can be happy endings

Were you referring to the same person in both couplets?

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Yes I am still referring to the same thing personified as a she