When We Began (Original Triolet Poem Inspired By @moeknows Monster Mind)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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We were just kids when we began
To share the warmth of our hearts
A gesture was how it began

We were just kids when we began
To discover how a smile can
Melt a bad day and cheer our hearts

We were just kids when we began
To share the warmth of our hearts


Monster Mind. There, in addition to the poem, he explained what a Triolet poem is and how you can write for yourself.This poem was inspired by @moeknows

I've been struggling to make one for a while and I finally decided to settle for this. It's about our innocence at childhood, when we were still very happy and trusting and carefree. I broke it into verses to help understanding. I hope you like it

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Nice. I never thought of making it into verses. That's a good twist. I was a little bit taken back by the challenge of this myself. It's not as easy as one might think. Good work, Gray.

Smiles

I'm glad you like it. Everytime, I read of your poems featuring a new format, I always wish I could do one for myself. You're like an inspiration to me.

And yes, it wasn't in any way easy

Thanks a lot