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RE: Burning Eyes — A poem about sleep deprivation in iambic pentameter

in #poetry7 years ago

I love this because I re read it four times and still am searching for what or why there is this pain. this poem does something there - it talks about pure emotion without directing you to a reason why exactly. Is it a person, a hurt, a physical pain? It mentions "Treasures sought" but Im still searching. I love that you can evoke some emotional feeling and have no idea why - like Im here Im connecting with you, even though I cant explain it. Very powerful.

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