Harmonic beginnings,
unbended chaos,
misty expanse,
species crept,
my eyes flicker.
Iniquity diffuse,
blood dispersed,
an immolation required.
Ambient changes,
alteration commence,
bursting endures,
dispense like death!
Empty garden,
a sinews was molded,
a ruach breaths into its nostril,
he live like king,
cattles, ram, and sheeps are his servants
creeping being are his helper,
fowls are his messenger!
A soul they have, less they perceived!
I was created, with breath,
in an image I can't see
and the likeness I can't discern,
modeled to His,
imperfect in perfect forged,
and vagabond when blood spill,
emancipation delivers with promise,
with greatness of humid years, anticipates,
when fullness of time reveals, I'm parting.
In third heaven...
Epiphania!
Edited version,
Sampaloc, Manila
September 4, 2017
Photo Credit: https://pixabay.com/en/galaxy-fog-kosmus-universe-2357507/
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very nice
Thank you very much dobartim!
Another fun poem from iwrite!
Thanks anne4farmer!
Wonderful words again!
You are a poet at heart, a warrior with words!
Whoa! Thanks poeticsnake!
Nabibilib na talaga ako sa kagalingan mo kuya. Hehe
Sir, nagkataon lang siguro iyan gawang iyan sir... makagagawa ka rin ng ganyan...
Sobrang nosebleed ako sir John. :D Very Nice Galing talga!
naku mam summer14... wag naman... ehehehe mababawasan ang readership ahuhuhu...
I had to shake my head 3 times to fully grasp the deepness of the story. Outstanding, kuya @iwrite !
No! Lol. Read and feel...
Really nice poem. :)
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your such a good poet Sir John
Thanks much elmcee1813!
nice poem
Thanks mam purpledaisy57!
a beautiful poem
Thanks sayee!
Walang palya! Hehe nice poem! 😉
weeee thanks enjienee!
My nose is bleeding right now..this is a piece of amazing poems. Really good.
Naman... Salamat bobiecayao!
This is really a meaningful piece sir @iwrite... :)
Thanks tegoshei!
thanks steemking777!