A soft subtle hiss reaches my bearing,
as smooth as the slick skin, you cuddle me.
It passes along with wooing feeling,
I breath a murmuring, fluctuating rise of moaning,
each stroke rescinds the undying touch,
gradually I embrace your summoning,
I tolerate your constant covering.
Let me hear you tickle my bones,
on a cold month of pleasures,
suffer me not to see your image of beacon.
albiet it faded hastily like you.
The swift embrace passes like wildfire,
your wicked aura ooze with threat,
yet gentle on the stream with silence,
a quiet amiable chum charming kind.
Let me be where you bring me wildly,
across the ravishing blue colour,
dancing with the cheerful mist,
where curving the wind I laid.
San Mateo, Rizal, Office
August 22, 2017
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i cant believe this!... this is outstanding!!!...& I am so glad to see that your work is getting noticed and doing well!...
you have a very interesting perspective on how you reflect the relationship between one to another!
I am very happy to have discovered you !- & I love the idea of a wicked aura - slight intoxication !
Your comment upbuilds
thank you so much, I can see your reputation on steemit is of monumental statute. Your opinion, therefor, means a lot to me <3
Well yours is to me as well. Reputation is in the substance of the human!
This is correct :] do you also write poetry?!
Not currently because i am busy but i can write poetry on the spot. I call them "toems" because they can't be found anywhere, where the "t" stands for Terry
Sweeeet . Terry for your name ! ... I like your thinking. Creative !:]
lol surpassinggoogle! that's new I think!
I'm in awe and humble at the same time. Your comment makes me even more thankful!
An ode to the wind... <3
Nice one sir @iwrite!!! :D
ang galing po talaga Sir.
ang bilis mam... salamat muli ng marami!
You're welcome sir! :)
Salamat ng marami mam luvabi!
nagkagulo sa reply ehehehe
Nice picture
hi fathakam! thanks very much!
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Nice photo
Thanks sureshgajera!
Ang lalim! Mag tatagalog na lang ako hehehehe.... pero naiintindihan ko hehehe...
Ay sir kennyroy wag kang malulunod ha! Thanks sir kennyroy!
Another nice piece @iwrite!
ay mam grazz... thanks again! salamat sa pagbasa ng aking abang tula!
Photo Credit
There it works hahahaha
lol... thanks... later na lang ulit ayusin... may susulatin pa me.
If you get to need free pictures, you can get them on pixabay or pexels
Thank you surpassinggoogle!
Wow naman! Kahanga-hanga po. You have a way with words na nakaka-inggit :)
kakayanin mo rin ito jazzybells, kaunting hugot at praktis lang... go ka na mam!
Another ourstanding poem @iwrite ❤
I love your use of words - their meaning and sound. I love how it all flows so beautifully like a melody.
Looking forward to more of your work my friend.
Naman mam... Kayang kaya mo rin ito... Kita mo tingin ka lang ng object diyan.. Katabi mo Tesauro na Diksiyonaryo tapos na ang buto-buto! Muli salamat ng marami!
Eto na pala yung palay na hinangin. Really nice. :D
Ay mam zararina! lol! onga hinangin! Salamat muli mam!
Isa kang alamat sir, ang lalim :)
sir allmonitors! haun o sir. makakatula ka rin sir... soon!
Poems is really ot my thing. :( Lumaki po kasi ako puro math and feeling ko di masyado nadevelop isip ko to appreciate poems. I hope by following and reading more poems, matutunan ko po siya ma-appreciate like ma'm @luvabi po. :) Thank you po.
sir jonatah/eastmeal. Isang malaking karangalan ang pagcomment mo nito. Malay mo sir kapag ikaw ay nagkainteres sa tula at tumula ka naman ng pangmatematikang tula. Mas kakaiba iyon at bago! Salamat muli sir eastmeal!
Salamat rin po sir @iwrite.
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Nice
thanks ewuoso!
Welcome
Wow
thanks again ewuoso!
Ok
Galing naman @iwrite! :)
ay marysent thanks!
Short but meaningful! galing sir! looking forward po sa iba nyo pang likha! God bless : D