You are good creating a poem, but you need to control your symbols, figure of speech, and jumping over and over again with the same thought that leads to being stagnant at the same "in the moment" thing that leads to a loop. I'm sharing you what I see in your poem. There are a lot of redundancy, repeating the same feeling... Use the words wisely and precise, lean and accurate.
I'd like to share a stanza according to the title of the poem.
A rousing aroma of her soul I feel her beat with heat,
A thrilling progression lying a heartfelt stroke,
An adventure desired with visual pleasure,
her thoughts I could hear, a wishful thinking.
well, it's just me... I'm only using the words that has impact upon reading. HOOK us up with your first line that will read for more and the desire to even know more the character you have created...
My two cents...
Thanks much apreciated, but as Ive mentioned in the other comment most of it has a purpose, I'm not writing a poem persay I'm writing a story in the form of a poem, it's also redundant because the particular person has messed me around a couple times, I am still new to the whole poetry thing but with the advise you've given me my content should get better.