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RE: Poem / The Path

in #poetry8 years ago

My head is spinning. If this is in the format of screenplay there are a lot of Jump Time... and Wala I'm in another worm hole! Too many symbols that is inconsistent and the direction seems vague... Nice gif though.

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It was just a couple of thoughts. The time jumps are purposeful, it's also very vague because I don't want to share too much or else it would be a poem like book😂😂

Have you read T.S. Eliot's Wasteland?

Nope, but I'll check it out :)

It's an excellent poem to read.