The Rippling Exigent

[iwrite]

I intoxicatedly howled  deleteriously the day you cast down my ardor,
it begets an harrowingly futile throbbing of joyful bitterness,
dredge with dust of unsavory flakes, I grated relentlessly mine asininity,
in bits I infused a cold cuts of love, I live profoundly distress, sleeping.

San Mateo, Rizal
October 10, 2017

Photo Credit: https://visualhunt.com/f2/photo/233355578/cf0f78164a/

Comments

[purpledaisy57]

Hmmm sounds like food... cold cuts hehe but seems angry

[iwrite]

Sounds like... pero between the lines lies the... Lol! Secret! Thanks mam purpledaisy57!

[jovema]

i just wish i can write beautiful poetry as this is.

[iwrite]

Yes you can write... In time... Just start with simple poem...

[emdesan]

Na-nosebleed po ako sir hehe pero ang ganda po ng poetry niyo promise!

[iwrite]

Ay mam... makakagawa ka rin nito... Malapit na! Thanks emdesan!

[jhiecortez]

yup, me too @jovema..

[iwrite]

Makakagawa ka rin mam jhiecortez... in the future...

[ishteldalosa]

Ang galling niyo po pala sir tumula. Nosebleed. haha

[iwrite]

Ay salamat mam ishteldalos... E, baka nakatsamba lang ako mam... Maikli tula ko mam... kahit busy, e, tumula na rin.

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[enjieneer]

Nosebleed ako hahah

[iwrite]

naman mam... kaya mo rin ito... thanks enjieneer!

[wellanshem]

dumugo yung ilong ko sir haha

[iwrite]

Ay wag sir! Naman... Mahirap iyan... Basa lang mahiwatigan mo lang tula naroon na iyon ang sustansiya niyan...

[lebron2016]

Ehhh... nakakanosebleed sir john. Bwahaha

[iwrite]

Wahahahaha... Naku pati ba ikaw mam shane? hayun o!

[lebron2016]

oo naman sir john ang layo ng pagkakaintindi ko. hehe

[neilanthony]

a food is talking about i love to eat always hungry =D

[iwrite]

I recommend sir neil to dissect again this simple poem... hayun o!

[tegoshei]

Why is this so full of hurt? xD
Nevertheless, keep on living...

[iwrite]

When it hurts... Does it mean I care? I mean the character in the poem....

[tegoshei]

It's either you care... or you're being selfish.. HAHAHA xD

[iwrite]

Hayun o! Thanks tegoshei!

[tegoshei]

np sir.. ^^

[hodorhodor]

Thank you very much indeed!

[iwrite]

You are welcome hodorhodor!

[bloghound]

Mukhang stress ka, kuya. Ganun pa man, nakapagsulat ka pa din ng magandang maganda. Chill!

[iwrite]

Hehehe halata ba Jerryl?! Thanks bloghound!

[julstamban]

pengeng tissue nosebleed, anlupet sir :)

[iwrite]

whahahaha ano ba iyan sir julsamban! hayun o! thanks julstamban!

[iyanpol12]

Galing talaga sir. Hehe

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[bobiecayao]

Sorry nahuli ako sa pag visit..flakes,medyo na intindihan ko to.

[iwrite]

wahahahaha... okay lang sir bo!

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[thatindianlady]

Nice poem :)

[iwrite]

thanks thatindianlady!

[syd30]

Nainspire ako sa mga poetry mo sir kea i am trying to be like you po

[iwrite]

salamat ng marami syd30!