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RE: What Happened? (to ART? to me? to us?)

in #poetry7 years ago

good one although I would stop at

Chirps of birds reminded me of the warmth outside.

after reading the end

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I'm glad you like it @j3dy. You can stop wherever ;) it's okay really.
This was written years ago, I was a teenager. I know better now. BTW I sort of agree, could have stopped there.

Thank you for sharing anyways, it's good to review and reflect.

Life is hard in the teenage years, sometimes it's good to have the perspective you have given, makes you a bit reluctant to do those above mentioned acts.

I like this community