Red

in #poetry7 years ago

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Credits: David Garry

Red

Midnight kisses
time curves around us
Our surroundings blur
while I'm transfixed on you.

The World filled with our love
forgetting all things blue
Take me to the time where
our view reset to red.

by Jarryon Paul

Struggled with this piece over the last two days. I have to say, @thewritersblock is a gem here on Steemit. Learn to become a better writer! Put yourself to the test. I hope you enjoy this simple poem. Much love to @sunravelme once again. Sorry, had to :)

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I'll say it again for those in the back- You put so much into honing your craft and it's great! <3

Thank you! The poetry will rise to match the commitment soon :) @sunravelme

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