VACATION TO FIND ME

in #poetry7 years ago

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It seems like forever I last had a me time.
Your love bottled me up,all I could think of was you.
I sold you my heart for no penny and got it back in pieces.

You painted my imperfections with the brightest colours for the whole world to see.
My best was never good enough.
You controlled my life like a remote.

Looking through the window, I wish I was one of those trees.
To be kissed radiantly by the sun.
And brushed by the chilling breeze

I have found myself.
A beautiful treasure worthy of all the love I give out.
Am taking a break from loosing myself to others.

Now I breathe.
Sitting, I stich back every piece of my heart.
I have fallen in love with a better person, me.

photocredit: Genevive Nnaji
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U try...oya comman pay tithe😛😛😛

Lol

For your audio?
Na you go pay

Kikikiki

This is a powerful poem. I love the theme. There are few things more fufilling or as powerful as self love.

True dear

Wow this is amazing, nice one dear.

Thanks boss

You're welcome my steem hero ✌.

I can't stop reading this, it was so great. I feel like falling in love over and over again.

But the write up is more about lost love

Wonderful, I give 5star for this writeup

Melodic piece @jeaniepearl. Impressive writing skills.

Thnks for your compliment

@jeaniepearl I feel your pain, thank God it is now gone!
I also understand the strength in finding your own footing.
Breathe deeply my friend, you are so amazing!!
I wish you the very best moving forward, you deserve it!!
Bear Hugs!! x0x0x

You are the best steem dad as @eunireal1 said
Thanks daddy bear
Big hugsss

He truly is and deserves more accolades

This is a beautiful depiction in words. Its so captivating. LIKE @surfyogi said..."After reading @jeaniepearl, you just want to keep her to yourself.
Its beautiful

Hahahahahaha
Observant mr

Thanks for the compliment

💔💔

I wish i was one of those trees to be kissed radiantly by the sun.

I love the personification used here and metaphor. Your poetry has really come a long way.

and i have fallen in love with a better person, ME!!!

I wish we can all do this

You painted my imperfections with the brightest colours for the whole world to see.

When the one who's suppose to shield you from the world is the very one who gives you up for the kill, nothing hurts more.

Exactly bro

I have found myself.
A beautiful treasure worthy of all the love I give out.
Am taking a break from loosing myself to others.

This beautiful you deserves the best and woe to him who does not realize that.

Thanks sweet

The only one who wont break you, is you!
Gat to love yourself soo much...

Well said dear

I have found myself.
A beautiful treasure worthy of all the love I give out.
Am taking a break from loosing myself to others.

Perfect note to self!
When we win the battle of finding ourselves and knowing our true worth. No one will ever be able to make us feel any less.

Well said dear
Thanks for stoping by