I really love the imagery of this one. Lots of things to dissect, and it really takes a serious topic so lightheartedly. I like how it's so self aware, and also how the story unfolded. The drawing that accompanies this was nice as well. I really like the worn letters and the lines used in the glass. Great work!
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Thanks, I had a lot of fun writing this. It is still pretty much a rough draft that I will be tweaking in the months to come. I like when poems are mysterious and I like to include religious imagery.
Oh religious imagery is a real surefire way to pique interest. There's just something about them that makes them innately esoteric, I think. Excited to see how you're going to tweak this!