Looking Out My Window

[jen8]

The beautiful sunshine,
Adorns the glistening lake, trees and plants,
That move in unison along with the wind.
Such wonderful and marvellous dreams,
Float effortlessly along,
In the open world.
All this I can see,
Yet I’m still not,
A complete part of it.
As I sit alone in my room,
Cut off from the rest of the world,
Looking out my window.

Comments

[greatdabu]

Well said. I like this :)

[jen8]

Thank you :)

[positivesteem]

The beauty of nature is well captured in your poem. I also write poems as well.
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[jen8]

Thanks for your feedback! I'll check out your poem and follow your future work.

[positivesteem]

Thanks, following you as well.

[akareem]

Very beautiful written upvoted
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[jen8]

Thanks

[akareem]

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[jen8]

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[mattbadura]

I like your poem, all though a bit sad, hope all is well :)

[jen8]

Thanks. Yes, this one is a bit sad. That's one of the things that I like about poetry....it lets you express the full range of human emotion and experience.

[mattbadura]

I would agree with that :)