to be a listener
You need me
to hang words on
I am your outside
looking back
You are the surface
of my skin
neither can discover
A limit
where the other ends...
to be a listener
You need me
to hang words on
Friends
to be a listener
You need me
to hang words on
I am your outside
looking back
You are the surface
of my skin
neither can discover
A limit
where the other ends...
to be a listener
You need me
to hang words on
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That was lovely!
thank you. @dalerog
That's amazing one.
Thanks!
That's beautiful I love the repetition of phrases!
Thanks @kubbyelizabeth
So lovely and simple! Hope I can aspire to simplify my writing this way. Glad to discover you @johnjgeddes, will be looking for more in the future :)
Thank you, @d-pend. Yes, it's an art that takes years to develop, to avoid unnecessary connectives and concentrate on strong nouns and verbs... and, of course, to have something to say LOL!!
This was a beautiful poem, resteemed!
thanks so much, @michellereneekid!
Still waiting and wanting to read the book...
Thank you for the poem.
😄😇😄
Yes, I know...I'm stalled in doing the revisions - should have left it alone, but I could never keep my fingers off a sore - and it has to be perfect, which it can never be, so I do have to leave it alone...I really do
Hmmm, I'm sorry to hear about the frustration and consequent delay...
Maybe I'll be pleasantly surprised one day to find a copy at a yard sale. ;)
ha ha, I stopped going to them for that reason
Ha.
Next time you see one, please grab it; I'll reimburse you + shipping... ;)
better still, I'll finish it and put it up on Amazon - It's not doing any good sitting in a file on the Cloud
I shall not complain if you do... given reasonable notice, I'll be one of your first customers! ;)
I read through all the comments and it would appear you need some assistance? I will be vey happy to proof read A Familiar Rain for you, with no remuneration required ! Merely for the enjoyment thereof. Beautiful Words BTW.
ha ha, thanks @awgbibb - yes, I need more hours in the day :)