yet I saw her, like the sun, even without looking.
—Leo Tolstoy
One snowy Moon
And some black frozen earth
And I’ll make for you
A poem…
A sun flare
Of words
The red suns
Of summer
Are not lovely
As your hair
Nor the soft warmth
Of June
Whenever
You draw near
And I’ll use stars
As tiny sparks
To light up
Your thoughts
But the best use
Of words
Starts a fire
In your heart.
I think your words net a lot of hearts in amber glow and warmth.
that is so kind and poetic, mere! Thank you :)
I enjoyed the simple wording of this poem and how you didn't need to use flowery words to bring meaning to the depth to the piece. Great write.
thanks, @moeknows - appreciate the encouragement
Love the painting and the poem. Both have colour and fire.
thank you, Ceci
this words starts a fire In my heart. ....very nice
thanks, @yagoub
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The charm of language.