Girlfriend Electric

[johnjgeddes]

Your ghost

Haunts me

nights;

But your image

Dies

At first light.

I talk

With you

In dreams,

But static

Clouds

What you mean.

This attraction

charged

By sighs and touches

electrifies

The air

About us.

© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved

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Comments

[missiontothemoon]

Powerful... I like this A Lot!

[johnjgeddes]

thanks, @misssiontothemoon

[ankitkukreja]

great post upvoted you keep going

[samer484]

Niceeee picture and great ur post word
Good luck @johnjgeddes👍👍👍

[johnjgeddes]

thanks, samer

[athenabree08]

Amazing as usual :-) Resteemed.

[johnjgeddes]

thanks, athena

[pjcswart]

i agree.

[booster]

This post has received a 6.82 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.

[doryaeriell]

@johnjgeddes Thanks for publishing this Charming instant in time for yourself..

[pjcswart]

Beautiful and dark.

[minnowsupports]

I think this should be continued for about two times longer :) I love it.

[johnjgeddes]

thanks @minnowsupports

[mrblu]

@johnjgeddes nice poem. upvoted

kindly check my poem thanks

https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-could-this-be-love-i-m-feeling-right-now

[johnjgeddes]

thanks

[lukakorba]

The electrification of the air around two lovers due to the charge between them is probably one of the most poetic and beautiful things out there. You managed to express this love, so alive and so real, perfectly! Well done, and thank you for sharing!

PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)

[jadae]

I love everything about this, the lines, the colors, the poetry! Get it boo!!!

[johnjgeddes]

thanks for reading @jadae

[aldentan]

I am gathering that it's tough trying to get over the loss of her, be it a breakup or perhaps death itself.

I find poem very poignant. And it's great cause you did it so well with few words.

Thanks @johnjgeddes

[johnjgeddes]

thanks, @aldentan for your thoughtful response

[aldentan]

No worries. Thank you for the art.

[louielowa]

Nice!! minimalist poet out there!!

[johnjgeddes]

thank you, @louielowa ...micro poetry is challenging

[louielowa]

i have new poem also mate hope you read this one https://steemit.com/poetry/@louielowa/we

[littlerph]

It's charming and yet sad for some reason. It's very nice @johnjgeddes. :)

[johnjgeddes]

It's the Irish in me I'm afraid - a mist clings to me :)

[leslyfay]

great poem..god job @johnjgeddes ..upvoted this post..

hope you have time to visit my blog and hope you have time to read my poems.. your upvote will highly appreciate..

[johnjgeddes]

Thanks, @leslyfay

[albertjester]

good poem..
regards

[johnjgeddes]

thank you, albert

[karchady]

:O wooooo

[johnjgeddes]

thanks for reading:)

[mers]

Full of sense and meaning in such short phrases.
Keep it up, I' m a fan.

[johnjgeddes]

Thank you so much, @mers. Such a kind comment!

[arbitrarykitten]

Beautiful word art. Solemn yet sprinkled with a dash of hopeful yearning...

[stillwatersart]

Dreamy words and painting! They go together well. Upvoting and following.

[awgbibb]

Beautifully crafted!

[johnjgeddes]

thanks, @awgbibb