No shelter from storms.
I used to think
I could hide in the attic
And all would be fine…
But I was wrong.
The arc light and roar
Blind and deafen.
Droplets splatter like dark cherries
Leaving a mess to clean up.
It’s scary…
Impossible to shut out.
It would be easier
To stay in the cellar—
But I’ve grown accustomed
To the view from up here.
Ya lo decía Bacherard en La poética del espacio, el ático es lo de arriba y los sótanos hablan de lo profundo, lo de abajo. Creo que así como a veces estamos bien desde arriba, hay momentos en los que ese sitio nos crea vértigo. A veces la casa no es el nido reconfortante donde quedarse, a veces es la casa el lugar de donde hay que salir. Bonita noche
A veces hay que tener cuidado de no agitar las profundidades :)
The first few verses are definitive and killer, @johnjgeddes. I think there are places where a man can feel safe. Finding that space is the dilemma. Each one of us looks for him and when he finds him, he stays there. There is no loss! Thank you, my friend
Finding a safe place is essential - often it is a person :)
Very good poem. I appreciate your effort and your poem is saying many things about the reality of life. I really like the first two lines.
Thank you for sharing with us :-)
Thank you, @amar15
Very nicely done. I like it! Thanks for sharing!
thanks
Like wondering posts heaven is just thinking of some kind of state of mind because no one will know how is happened everyone know that Heaven have lot of good things like happiness joiners everything is good so you will keep trying or you will trying to give a definition of Heaven is a nice post very good keep it up
thanks for your response
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They said there's no better place than where they're waiting for him, @john. If you investigate, even the animals look for a place to take refuge and be at peace, a place to be quiet, protected. A house, a love, a feeling sometimes protect. Greetings
very true...thanks
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only our own home makes us relief in any situation like Storm rain ..our home is our home.. where we can live without tension without any disadvantages..
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I like ur poem including d art image....
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The painting is so good where u collect that painting??? In the opem first 1 to 5 line like it. It's your own opem??? Are writter??