In the bitter scent of fall,
When the scraping
Down the hall
Of maple stars
Makes me wonder
If the years
Were worth it all.
Has life
Disappointed you
Or made you
Lose your fire?
Do you see October
As a winter prelude,
The mere remnants
Of desire?
Or perhaps you think
We're merely
Wine-stained dregs
Of lovers
We once were.
"... a winter prelude"
Very nice, liked it a lot.
thanks, @pbgdeluxe
You should be titled, 'The Mood Poet'.
Well done.
I know the photo is not important, but just had to add that it is beautiful
thanks, arthur - appreciate that
fantastic poem.
thanks
Maple stars could feel the maples leaves on this one sweet and melancholic great poem and picture choice.
thank you
i liked it. resteemed.
thanks, athena
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Melancholy
thanks
Seems that their love life moves in a cyclic motion and nothing really changed??
Always, you've got me reading over and over again.
Love this expressions;
"bitter scent", "Has life disappointed you or made you loose your fire?..... Hot!
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Wonderful poem ❤
Dark Regret! Makes one really think of squandered Time!