Moody

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)





I’m sorry, love,
I’m moody


It’s the rain
Within me

I invited it in
One misty day

And it clung to me
And decided to stay

It’s the Irish in me
I smile

And yet I know
all the while

I invited the rain in
one day

And the mist
decided to stay



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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You are an inspiration. I love your work! I will keep an eye out for more. Thank you for sharing!

Excellent pome.Thanks for sharing @johnjgeddes. i like your post and upvoted.

thank you :)

Most welcome.

a misty mood ..... be careful or you'll grow moss out your ears :)

Irish moss ;)

Ben would like that.

Mmmhhhmmmm, feeling the downpour.

that's what I hoped :)

Good post

thanks

Welcome friend

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This gave me goosebumps - thank you

Yeaaa. Johnjgeddes gives you that.

Awesome!

It sounds like a song :) I could hum along to it, it's really lovely

what a great poems,...
"I’m sorry, love,
I’m moody "

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have a great day

Very apt for how i'm feeling today, beautiful

What a lot of truth in that poem! (Not so much the bit about the Irish, LOL!)

my wife's Scottish - she lightens my dark side:)

And you have a Scottish last name too! Lots of Geddeses in my home town. My sons' great- grandmother was a Geddes.

that is so cool!

You may be related! :-)

that would be cool!

Settles me into a misty mood. Brilliant... :)

I've been moody myself when it comes to love. Fantastic poem! <3

I love this! Simple and beautiful.

I write poem too. This is awesome!

Wonderful words