My Sin

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)





life is too much like a pathless wood
Where your face burns and tickles with the cobwebs
Broken across it
―Robert Frost



I walk the path
In autumn chill
And pass the way
To our lonely hill.


I hesitate,
Then think I’ll spy
Upon our lives
In days gone by.

But who am I
To retrace old steps
And climb up roots
To a broken fence?

Sommer’s hill
Is steep and still
And bends the birches
Up the hill

Peeling back
White brittle sheets
Where I wrote you poems
With a charred fire stick

We kept them
In an old dead tree
For you and I
And posterity

Many years
Have come between
And tears and time
Have wiped them clean

I’m often tempted
To look and see
But to find them gone
Would be disappointing

I try to think
As I go past
The lifeless tree
Would let them last

But I’d rather visit
In my thoughts
Than climb the hill
And end up lost.



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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beautiful poetry with amazing photograph

This deserves some attention. Upvoted and resteemed :)

Like your poetry

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Poetry is the journal of a sea animal living on land, wanting to fly in the air.

Another excellent poem! Keep them coming!

Obviously I have no idea what you had in mind, (what was the author smoking concept :-) )
But your words had a lot of meaning to me.
Thank you for writing & posting!

I adore you're writing.

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Lovely reflection on the past. Sometimes it is better we have the memories than climb the hill to find disappointment...