Our friendship group crumbles...
Everything seems so different,
Where are the good times we once had?
We're nothing but strangers in the same vicinity,
Reincarnated people and it's just so sad.
The harder we all try to fix things,
The greater the destruction from the bomb,
The spark and the special bond we all possessed,
Dying like the light when the flame has gone.
The stubbornness to make up,
You'd think it would be the simplest of tasks,
Instead we're all slyly stood around,
Hiding the truth like thieves behind the masks.
I wish we could go back and relive the past,
Have more meet ups rearranged,
But I guess we better kiss goodbye to the 'us',
And accept that everything has changed.
We're all at different chapters in our lives,
Reaching new heights in our own glory,
The next thing you know it'll be husbands and wives,
And the beginning of a new story.
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An Original poem written by @jonathanyoung
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed my poem. Recently I've witnessed a lot of subtle changes occurring and one of them being the relationship between me and my friends. So, I thought the best way to approach this change would be to confront it. I feel like there is a no better way to express your thoughts and feelings than through poetry. Therefore, it brings a sense of relief to know that I can speak my mind for the community to see.
Hope everyone is having a fantastic week. Jonathan. :)
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Last time together friends @jonathanyou
@jonathanyoung This poem is precious, but why the friendship that has been in live so destroyed
Thank you @alhidayat. The honest answer to that is I don't know. I guess we're all just growing up and with that comes many changes within ourselves.
You did write well and passed a hand and heart of friendship to all your friends out there @jonathanyoung dying in silence knowing all has gone wrong is not all too good and I am glad you tried reaching out to your friends.
The manner in which you wrote out the poem captivates the mind you did well in speaking your mind buddy @jonathanyoung.
Keep the great work up dearie💙💙💙
Thank you very much for your kind comment @eunireal1. I'm glad that you too value the importance of speaking your mind because so many people allow negative emotions to get the better of them. In my opinion, there is no better way than releasing these thoughts and feelings through your own creativity.
May I be friends with you I want to have more themes in steem
what a beautiful post and i really liked the way you wrote it this was awesome :)
Thank you @blazing. It really means a lot to know that members of the steemit community enjoy my posts. I appreciate your comment!
Thanks so much i thought you might get frustrated with my comments hahah :D
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