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RE: Level Me (An Original Poem)

in #poetry6 years ago

The imagery of the last verse is so amazing and so tasteful

as we sip our tea
with the dust
of a million miles

I couldn't really grasp the intent of this beautifup verse, but the tone seems so awesome and relaxing I almost felt like it's a lullaby really. Beautifully written poem overall, one of the best I've read from you

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