RE: Cameo of Us

[josediccus]

Your second verse has an ABAB rhyme scheme, i use this too in my poems

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[johnjgeddes]

actually, the whole poem uses alternate rhyme, somewhat disguised by the use of proximate or near rhyme. Usually this rhyme scheme is used to covey a sense of conflict, but I'm using it here to convey the notion of duality :)

[josediccus]

Well that would be poetic license buddy no limit no boundaries, i still feel they make a mark in the mind

[johnjgeddes]

yes, so do I :)