There was a climax of a sort @raj808 then there was this poetic calmness at the end really, I mean it's like the embers of fire calming down to give off soot really, it's purposeful, short, straight to the point and it's so good I wanted it to continue, dramatic effect to poetry wow
Thanks Jose.
I'm glad you noticed the rhythm of the poem, it's something I did on purpose. To me, that's what fear feels like, it's kind of like a burning wave of magma.
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