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(I)
When hope decides to die...
Men climb on beer to make them high
Virgins decides to use their thigh
Even assurance,becomes to costly to buy
(II)
When hope decides to die
Even angels starts to cry
Even the wind cease to fly
Even your father starts to deny
(III)
When hope decides to die
You can't jump, but Irons fly
The world drowns,still,your throat is dry
(IV)
When hope decides to die
Popes loses their faith
Suicides becomes fate.
Even love,starts to hate
(V)
When hope decides to die
Even the skies would weep
Even the stars will never sleep
Even your grave would not be so deep
(VI)
When hope decides to die
The eyes would drown in tears
Dreams would be left to die
Courage would become porridge
Giving up will become an anthem
the sunset will sleep at midday
The evening will wake when dawn is come
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POETIC NOTES & ANALYSIS
This poem is a piece that narrates the ability of the human psyche to create a situations in alarming circumstances, it's a poem that narrates the most trying time of a man, it tends to look at the last resort of makind when difficulties have taken a toll.
It tend to exploit the overtures and describes what it feels like to be lost, marooned and left secluded, the title alone seems catchy buy carries deep meaning, it uses figure of speeches mostly personification, similes and metaphoric expressions.
Written, edited & analysed
By @Josediccus
17/5/2018
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