It's been a couple days since I have posted a poem written by many great and talented writers.
This poets name is Drone and the poem was published January 28, 2018. It is titled "Some of US".
I found this great quote about poetry and I couldn't had said it any better. A quote that truth and I believe it is the reason we choose to read in the first place.
Poetry can be dangerous, especially beautiful poetry, because it gives the illusion of having had the experience without actually going through it. ― Rumi
Some of Us
When some of us
Try
to see
We see
a beautiful mist
within our feelings
and multicolourd words
that we cannot describe
on your terms
for when you feel
only
with your brain
the left right hemisphere
is the place
where you pay
for your non belief
that there is
a better way
from the cancer corruption
that we live
every day
hard
for the honest heart
to touch the mist
that holds the form
you feel
when you pray
To your Self
Written by drone
Thank you, for this @joseph. More and more, I'm coming to view poetry as prayer -- as a way of giving thanks, expressing awe, and articulating that difficult to reach region of our soul, longing to commune with the Divine.
Here is a prayer-poem of mine, below, that I hope you/readers will enjoy:
Breath
Beneath the intricate network of noise
there’s a still more persistent tapestry
woven of whispers, murmurs and chants
It’s the heaving breath of the very earth
carrying along the prayer of all things:
trees, ants, stones, creeks and mountains alike
All giving silent thanks and remembrance
each moment, as a tug on a rosary bead
while we hurry past, heedless of the mysteries
And, yet, every secret wants to be told
every shy creature to approach and trust us
if only we patiently listen, with all our senses.
-@YahiaLababidi, Egyptian poet
WONDERFUL ☻
Liked when u shared "Every SHY creature to approach and trust us
if only we patiently listen, with all our senses." ♥♥
Ah-h-h the mysteries of #LIFE
#POETRY
Very grateful for your close reading & attention, @janashby!
I hope you will also enjoy other posts & poetry on my blog.
Here’s my latest, on The Poetry of Exile: https://steemit.com/utopian-io/@yahialababidi/the-poetry-of-exile
Nice poem👌👌👌👌👌
You are a good poem writer
I had also written some poem you can read on my blog
He didnt write it
I written it👿👿
Loved this post from my heart 💖💖💖💖
Very nice poem.It touched my heart.Superb writing.@upvoted
somehow agree dear but poetry take away our self in the world of imagination where we can amuse
So important to take those moments to let go of self and just be. I was particulary struck by this part ...for the honest heart
to touch the mist
that holds the form
you feel
when you pray
To your Self
Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed very much:)
Good and religious poetry, I love it. But I do not understand the real meaning.
For what we see with our eyes
We can't describe to your terms!
It's good poetry.
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Its really wonderful poetry, thanks resteemed
I appreciate you sharing this. Writing is something I also love doing. I hope to see some more. I try to write as much as possible when I have the desire to unleash my emotions. I look forward to seeing some more by you.
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Nice poem @joseph, i like it :)
xoxo :)
@micch
BRAVO (I don't say this very often).
Felt your poem, deep in my ♥♥ HEART .
Well said, for the Times we live in today. ==> Referring 2 the words, "a better way
from the cancer corruption
that we live
every day."
And Particularly liked the lines :
"We see
a beautiful mist
within our feelings
and multicolourd words
that we cannot describe"
THANKS INDEED .
JAN A (Will Resteem/SHARE)
#poetry #spirituality
Very well written, wonderful lines. Thank you :)
We feel what we feel because our hearts are divorced to our minds
We feel what we feel because our minds are the arena of bashing thoughts
We feel what we feel because our minds carry heavier thoughts... Our hearts carry heavier feelings and our eyes carry heavier tears.
I love this poem.
Gran escrito @joseph Pasate por mi blog :)
You should really try to make up your own poetry, I'm sure your brain is as beautiful as these people you admior
Please could you supply a link to the original posting? Or a link to 'Drone'. I am new here and my search was fruitless.
Hello friend @joseph I had not read a spiritual poetry, lque our feelings are filled with the Love of God. Thanks for sharing