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RE: The UNTOLD LOVE.

in #poetry6 years ago

Nice one bhai. bahut acha. You must be young, all that romantic hormonal chemistry you describe in your poem.

The format is really impressive with the font and border.

I spent six months in India, are you there? I could be wrong.

Anyway as for romance...don't fall for the illusion, don'y let it bewilder you, you are courting a ball and chain, a temporary illusion wrapped up in a pretty package for mating. It is your hormones dictating there and nothing romantic.

Poetry is inspiring though and yours is impressive. Just the very end needs a rhyme to really top it off.

Namaste