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RE: Rooftops

in #poetry6 years ago

Wow! I love this... the imagery, the way I can apply all sorts of different meanings to it... I especially like this stanza:

I'll speak to you like we're both feathers
and we're trapped beneath these old wings
of a dove who's lost all navigation,
she's been crashing headfirst into things

Well crafted, my friend!